For the first part of class, Chimuanya and I discussed what direction her third essay would go in. She is very interested in the ideas presented by the film Waiting for Superman and wishes to explore them further. She has already started her research and found two sources that she wants to use. That means she needs one or two more. She will continue research and write an outline and annotated bibliography for the essay this week.
Secondly, we reviewed Essay 1 and 2. The majority of revising and editing had already been accomplished, but there were still some lingering awkward sentence structures and poor word choices that we worked on and ultimately improved. Chimuanya is making good progress.
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