Monthly Archives: November 2013

Delanie turned in the first draft of her second paper this week.  She had better topic and concluding sentences than in her last first draft, and she had a strong conclusion, but could use more specific analysis in each paragraph.  … Continue reading →

Today Kailin and I reviewed the outline of her second essay. Kailin had a lot of midterms and papers due this week, and wasn’t sure where she wanted to go with this essay, so I told her doing an outline … Continue reading →