This week Cheryl submitted the final draft of her second essay, while Sophie submitted an annotated bibliography in preparation for her final research essay. Cheryl’s final draft was well-organized, interesting, and did a good job of incorporating her two chosen … Continue reading
Student: Maud Muosieyiri TA: Lily Byerly 2013 Spring Final Assignment For your final assignment, I’d like you to rework one paper and two thoughtletters. You may use my reflection letters or comments on your drafts to guide your revisions. … Continue reading
Today Chimuanya and I worked on the first draft of her research paper. I was surprised when I first read it because it differed dramatically from the outline, but was impressed by the fluidity with which she incorporated a multitude … Continue reading
Haley, 4/27/13: Haley wrote the first draft of her third paper for this week’s meeting. I had only required her to make an outline and do some preliminary writing, but she was motivated and decided to write a complete first … Continue reading
On Sunday, Qi turned in a thought letter meant to mirror the organization of her research paper. She chose powerful quotes from her sources and interacted with them well in her own voice, as we practiced last week. I pointed … Continue reading
This week Cheryl handed in a complete draft for her second essay, and Sophie turned in the final draft of her second essay. Cheryl’s second essay was much better than her first. It was well-organized and drew on some good … Continue reading
Maud, 4/20/13: Maud wrote the final draft of her second paper for this week’s meeting. The paper had a nice flow and a solid argument. It contained many sentence level issues, mostly concerning sentence structure and comma use. I sent … Continue reading
I began class with Ashley on Tuesday by asking how she felt about the final draft of her paper on The Street. She said she felt it was an improvement from her first paper because she used more quotes without … Continue reading
Maud and Haley, 4/13/13: I met with Maud and Haley together this week. They had both completed the second drafts of their second papers and sent them to each other and to me. I commented on both papers, but let … Continue reading
Today Chimuanya and I reviewed the outline and annotated bibliography for her third essay. In the outline she had written two thesis statements (with different wordings) so we talked through each one and came up with a hybrid version. She … Continue reading