12/14/13: Saraphin wrote the final draft of her third paper for this week’s meeting. She had revised it substantially and the result was a solid, well argued paper. I wrote her a reflection letter on the paper and we discussed … Continue reading
12/6/13: Saraphin wrote the first draft of her third paper for this week’s meeting. She had clearly done a lot of research and thinking and had written a solid first draft. She told me that she was just happy to … Continue reading
11/24/13: Saraphin did research and planning for her third paper for this week’s meeting. She turned in a preliminary thesis and outline as well as some free writing on her chosen subject. She had changed her topic slightly since our … Continue reading
11/14/13: Saraphin turned in the final draft of her second paper for this week’s meeting. The paper was an improvement on her second draft, particularly in terms of argument clarity. After seeing that Kailin had been confused about her thesis, … Continue reading
11/10/13: Saraphin turned in the second draft of her second paper for this week’s meeting. The draft was an improvement over the first draft in terms of organization and clarity. We looked over my comments (there were fewer than usual … Continue reading
1/3/13: Saraphin turned in her annotated bibliography for paper three and her first draft of paper two for this week’s meeting. Her annotated bibliography was carefully written and will be a solid start to paper three. We went through my … Continue reading
10/27/13: Saraphin turned in a thoughtletter on the source for her second paper for this week’s meeting. She had some trouble finding her original source (a movie which is only being shown at scheduled viewings), so she chose another movie … Continue reading
10/20/13: Saraphin wrote the final draft of her first paper for this week’s meeting. The final draft was a great improvement over the first and second, particularly in terms of topic sentences and argument clarity. I wrote her a formal … Continue reading
10/13/13: Saraphin turned in the second draft of her first paper for this week’s meeting. She had originally planned to make it the final draft , but, after reading my comments, decided to keep it as the second draft. She … Continue reading
10/6/13: Saraphin wrote the first draft of her first paper for this week’s meeting. She was a little late to our meeting due to being held up at a Help Room for another class. We discussed changing the time of … Continue reading