10/6/13: Saraphin wrote the first draft of her first paper for this week’s meeting. She was a little late to our meeting due to being held up at a Help Room for another class. We discussed changing the time of … Continue reading
Today Kailin and I worked on specifying what she really means to say in her essay. Oftentimes her descriptions are abstract and general, so I worked with her on using particular examples from the text to support what she’s saying. … Continue reading
I had Delanie write a reverse outline for her first draft of her paper on the documentary Home. She wrote the topic of each paragraph, and a sentence explaining its relationship to her thesis. This revealed a disconnect between the … Continue reading