11/10/13:
Saraphin turned in the second draft of her second paper for this week’s meeting. The draft was an improvement over the first draft in terms of organization and clarity. We looked over my comments (there were fewer than usual in anticipation of Kailin’s peer edit). We discussed moving some parts of different paragraphs and clarifying some of the examples. We tried some fixes on her computer and discussed the pros and cons of different approaches. We also discussed her ideas about the third paper. She had many ideas and I encouraged her not to bite off more than she can chew. Saraphin will be turning in her final draft of paper two for next week’s meeting. Finally, we decided that she will complete a handbook for the final assignment.